tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5447343438260939719.post7798748235527879663..comments2023-04-27T16:54:53.313+01:00Comments on Emma Morley: From Script to Screen - further ideas and initial sketchesAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06574554330263069354noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5447343438260939719.post-51560020273467847712015-01-11T19:43:21.937+00:002015-01-11T19:43:21.937+00:00Great, thanks Phil. I'd thought about having a...Great, thanks Phil. I'd thought about having a kitchen worker dreaming of being a clown, but I hadn't thought of it being a child. The children idea came later, so it'd be great to incorporate the two. I'll get on it! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06574554330263069354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5447343438260939719.post-65667581131423594162015-01-11T19:16:00.771+00:002015-01-11T19:16:00.771+00:00Hi Emma, I like the fact that your characters are...Hi Emma, I like the fact that your characters are children playing at being the characters - that's a nice loosening up of the characters. Personally, I don't think you're yet using the kitchen really in a proactive sense; I can imagine how a child might, using a paintbrush, turn their kitchen in the semblance of a circus - i.e. painting kitchen stuff to resemble other performers in the circus; or how about this (just thinking out loud here) the 'paintbrush' could be one of these:<br /><br />http://www.leilasgeneralstore.com/images/2.4703/pensel.jpeg (a pastry brush)<br /><br />Maybe your character is in fact a lowly potwash boy/girl who dreams of running away to the circus - and maybe there's a clowning audition - and maybe the potwash boy uses the the pastry brush to a) apply his face-paint, or b) turns the kitchen at night into a circus (painting stuff up to resemble other characters) so he can rehearse or...<br /><br />Anyway - by making him a lowly potash boy in some fast-food kitchen (or similar) you're using the environment to tell us something very quickly about his quality of life, and of course it's not uncommon for artists and performers to be working in these kinds of minimum wage jobs... anyway, just some additional thoughts!tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5447343438260939719.post-54034830270994580922015-01-11T14:09:28.540+00:002015-01-11T14:09:28.540+00:00A cute story Emma !
A cute story Emma !<br />Kavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15252160727590494417noreply@blogger.com